Using Unnecessary Words
On the other hand, another opinion views that human Is naturally the most important living being on earth. Consequently, a human is entitled to utilize nature with its whole content regarding people’s need for self-survival and improvement in living condition.
There is no doubt that the environment is getting polluted every day. It is important to take certain measures to protect our planet.
Repetition in Task 1:
While people in North America mainly used water for industrial purposes (48%), agricultural use of water was also high (39%), with water being least used for domestic purposes (13%). Similarly, people in Europe also used water mostly for industrial purposes (53%), followed by agricultural use (32%) and domestic purposes (15%).
On the other hand, people in South America utilised water the most for agriculture (71%), followed by domestic use (19%) and industrial use (10%). Also, Africans used water mainly for agricultural purposes (84%), followed by domestic use (9%) and industrial purposes (7%).
In task 1, we are expected to use a minimum of 150 words and it is better not to repeat words. Otherwise, an examiner may think that we are using memorized patterns.